As I mentioned in class, we are starting our common writing project. So, here we go! Thanks so much for your collaboration :-)
TASK: Building up a story by adding a paragraph, sentence, even a word. You can contribute as many times as you want, as long as you follow others' threads. Make sure you keep the writing style, but of course feel free to let your imagination and inspiration grow. Our deadline to "close" the story will be March 1st. At the end of it we'll all decide the most suitable title for it. So, join the project and happy writing!
“It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.” — George Orwell, 1984
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I was preparing my lunch after having been working all morning. I started to eat my salad when suddenly I heard a noise. I opened my window and looked out but I didn't see anybody or anything. However a few minutes later I heard the noise again.
I heard it inside me: I was very hungry!
But it wasn´t only inside me. Something heard again outside and now, something moved quickly in the garden. I only could see a shadow.
I ran quickly behind the shadow, but I couldn´t catch it. I was looking around garden for a long time. Suddenly I heard a hard noise, I was extremely terrified and I ran home.
David R. :It might not have been a good idea to try it. Now, is it necessary to keep calm.
Sonia. After a few minutes, I decided to go out to the garden and I could see an awful person with a weapon. I ran toward him, however something happened that I couldn't imagine!
That's a turn up for the books! The stranger was in my garden was the star of the scary movie I saw last weekend. Was it a dream or was it reality? I was terrified.
My brain has a problem, I can´t understand this situation, I can´t understand if this is real or an imagination, but the voice's into my brain is coming back, I need help, Who will be able the person that can help me? I need an exit, every door are closed, what's happen now! I can't move my body, oh no! the noise is envolved every place, please help me!!! I'm here!!!
And then, I woke up!I wish I hadn´t eaten lentils with chickpeas for dinner!
Carmen. The day proceeded normally
but when the night came. I was terrified and attentive the minimum movement. Suddenly I heart a strange noise but it was in the basement.
So much noise was unbearable. I decided to complain to the neighbors who had organized the party. I expected that they will turn the volumen down or they will invite me
I finally decided to go back home I was in no mood for parties, I went upstairs and try to sleep at least, but that mysterious noise is still bothers me. Now I´ve realized that the lentils with chickpeas have nothing to do with the strange things that are happening at home. That noise downstairs confirms my worst suspicions, I´m not at home alone as I believed. Is not a nightmare, I wish it could, but I´ve pinched myself and it hurts. What can I do? should I call my neighbor or the police? and if they think I´m crazy? or .. just come down and face with the strange visitor...
That night I could sleep normally. The next morning, an old woman knocked on my door and asked me if I used to hear stranger noises. She told me that in this house had taken place strange things. For this reason, the price of the house had been so cheap.
Juana Mª Romero Ramírez said...
Then the old woman starded at me and she told me:- you must be home with your eyes open.the last tenants ran away one night and I didn'T see more. I suppose that they were frightened...
Exactly, that is the reason why the neighbours have never seen they again!! So I have a problem a need a good medium for stopping my problem, maybe I will be able to call Alison Divois, She can tell me which is exactly the problem, if the problem is me or it's my brain. But suddenly, the noices come back, Oh, shout out!!!, stupid house, every day, every moment, that I try to think, the house startes to make noise, uf, this house is so silly!!! I'm bored, I need a breather, I need a Kit-kat...
Noises, noises... How much noises! If we used earplugs it wouldn´t have mystery!
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